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    (CR)~(-Nami-)~
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    Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by (CR)~(-Nami-)~ on Tue Dec 07, 2010 8:08 pm

    “ What’s Left To Learn “



    Knowing Others is Intelligence,
    Knowing Yourself is True Wisdom

    Mastering Others is Strength
    Mastering Yourself is True Power

    Years ago, as I stood in your kitchen
    in green neon socks and first bra bravado
    I did not care that you were born
    in a cabin on top of Lookout Mountain.

    Your smell of mothballs and Lady Stetson
    lulled me to sleep
    and my droopy eyes were not surprised when
    you drove to the store in second gear.

    Years later I would learn of the
    red hot talent
    that took you from Alabama to New York
    for an exhibit of your own.

    Perhaps the slow train ride back
    is what makes you question my weight
    or my complexion.
    Now,

    looking at your painting
    of the cabin on Lookout Mountain,
    my feet wider
    and flatter
    from the weight of my own train rides,
    I wonder:

    If I look close enough,
    can I see through the window
    into your room?
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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by Lyckety-Splyt on Wed Dec 08, 2010 12:36 pm

    Its aight ..


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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by +^C4^+ on Wed Dec 08, 2010 3:48 pm

    it is butt i lik rhming poems =)
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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by (CR)~(-Nami-)~ on Wed Dec 08, 2010 4:30 pm

    ok smart alaec ive got more i started with that one cuz its published

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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by EliteKen on Thu Dec 09, 2010 1:03 pm

    sounds like sadness, but the fake kind rofl. sry am not that nice
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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by (CR)HiddenMist on Thu Dec 09, 2010 1:17 pm

    Its Coolz Very Happy
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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by Lyckety-Splyt on Thu Dec 09, 2010 2:54 pm

    (CR)~(-Nami-)~ wrote:ok smart alaec ive got more i started with that one cuz its published

    uhm .. kay


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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by (CR)~(-Nami-)~ on Thu Dec 09, 2010 9:13 pm

    ok How about this one its published as well..

    ~` Oh Em Gee, My Po-Et-Try Is So OD `~




    As I wake up to the world, I’m looking ahead
    I’m counting my steps, never knowing what to expect
    Was supposed to strive in school , get eternal success
    But what goes in my head, could see me one day doing SAT Prep

    I could be the next
    I’m fresh
    Something my haters always confess

    Like Hippocrates, I’ve created my own Philosophy
    Conspiracies to stopping me
    People get annihilated properly
    Been abused on so many levels, but never let that bother me

    Looking at what’s in front of me
    Is nothing but pure comedy
    Money hungry creatures who worship playing the lottery

    Satan is in the Souls of People who are giving Authority
    Superstitions
    Reminiscent into animals who are treated Symbolically
    Life has many Loopholes which I am always expressing comically

    To my amazement
    People always hiding emotions like basements
    Frustrations
    Complications
    Landing more and more situations

    Bodies sold
    Disowned just to make one more payment
    Populations are cautious
    Just to step into a mere train station
    Countries fuse together
    Only for the annihilation of Nations
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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by (-DK-) on Thu Dec 09, 2010 11:03 pm

    ay nami..real talk.. ur a beast. i might have to post some of mines up der. but mines isn't anywhere compared to urs good.
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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by Lyckety-Splyt on Fri Dec 10, 2010 1:10 pm

    (CR)~(-Nami-)~ wrote:ok How about this one its published as well..

    ~` Oh Em Gee, My Po-Et-Try Is So OD `~




    As I wake up to the world, I’m looking ahead
    I’m counting my steps, never knowing what to expect
    Was supposed to strive in school , get eternal success
    But what goes in my head, could see me one day doing SAT Prep

    I could be the next
    I’m fresh
    Something my haters always confess

    Like Hippocrates, I’ve created my own Philosophy
    Conspiracies to stopping me
    People get annihilated properly
    Been abused on so many levels, but never let that bother me

    Looking at what’s in front of me
    Is nothing but pure comedy
    Money hungry creatures who worship playing the lottery

    Satan is in the Souls of People who are giving Authority
    Superstitions
    Reminiscent into animals who are treated Symbolically
    Life has many Loopholes which I am always expressing comically

    To my amazement
    People always hiding emotions like basements
    Frustrations
    Complications
    Landing more and more situations

    Bodies sold
    Disowned just to make one more payment
    Populations are cautious
    Just to step into a mere train station
    Countries fuse together
    Only for the annihilation of Nations

    great.


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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by (CR)~(-Nami-)~ on Fri Dec 10, 2010 3:20 pm

    thanx thats only the beginning
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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by (CR)~(-Nami-)~ on Thu Dec 16, 2010 9:35 pm

    heres my third...

    her picture hangs upon the wall,
    the clock still ticks along.
    memories fill every corner,
    her presence is very strong

    three years have passed since shes left me
    i can feel her standing there,
    i can almost see her pretty face,
    my senses are so aware

    i havent changed a single thing
    since she took her Mighty flight
    her brush still lies on the table
    where sheleft it that last night

    she was reading from her bible,
    when the spirit took her away
    glasses askew upon her face,
    when i woke the very next day

    this room brings me great comfort
    in the fact that nothings changed
    when from this world ive dissappeared
    it can all be rearranged

    but, for now i sit within her presence
    and feel comfort in my heart
    her physical body has gone from me
    but, her spirit will never depart...



    and no noone has died..
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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by (~CR~)R3DRUM on Tue Dec 21, 2010 5:00 pm

    Great job Nami all you gotta do is add a nice beat to ir and hook and its all good xD


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    Re: Tell Me What You Think..

    Post by (CR)~(-Nami-)~ on Tue Dec 21, 2010 11:30 pm

    lol thanx maybe i will

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